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Chilitree-many thanks for your comment.Much appreciated.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 22, 2007 at 6:08 AM
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I can relate to that one....
posted by
Chilitree
on March 21, 2007 at 11:30 PM
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drohan and Shadow---just in case you 'pop back' here at any time---
I'm sorry I missed your comments-until today-Wednesday!(Had company-couldn't get onto site)-want to say thank you-to you both-for reading and your responses!! Much appreciated.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 21, 2007 at 2:06 PM
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Chris - Brilliant & witty. I savoured every word & "drop" along with you...
Hope you don't have to do that often ..haha
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 20, 2007 at 6:24 AM
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so beautiful chris ..i loved it
posted by
drohan254
on March 19, 2007 at 9:56 PM
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Many thanks Bhaskaring--I'm pleased you said it that way round.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 19, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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Many thanks Lustorlove-for reading-I think it will hit home with most.Chris
posted by
Scramble
on March 19, 2007 at 8:16 AM
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Scramble
The sweet humour I think envelops a little melanncholy, but the former overshadows the latter.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 19, 2007 at 6:44 AM
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scra
this hits home here too
posted by
Lanetay
on March 18, 2007 at 3:41 PM
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Troosha--many thanks for your comment! I did wonder if anyone would
see 'past' the humour side of things?You're very perseptive! Thanks.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 18, 2007 at 11:12 AM
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richinstore--I did have fun thank you-it was alovely evening! Thanks for
commenting.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 18, 2007 at 11:10 AM
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Scramble
A little bit of humour to this one - but also some sadness. Nicely done....
posted by
Troosha
on March 18, 2007 at 9:26 AM
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scramble
have fun
posted by
richinstore
on March 18, 2007 at 8:08 AM
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Sunnybeach--thanks for your comment.No-neither do I-as a rule.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2007 at 10:48 AM
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Very good!
It's one good reason I don't drink. Hahaha.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on March 17, 2007 at 8:25 AM
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1YimeSoldier-what a lovely comment to make-thank you so much!
And-thanks for the drink.It's Mother's day-I'm going out for a meal tonight with two of my sons--I'll take that glass with me!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2007 at 6:45 AM
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Your poem was like taking a journey. Thank You,
posted by
1TimeSoldier
on March 17, 2007 at 6:38 AM
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Thanks afzal-for looking in and reading. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2007 at 6:33 AM
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No such luck jake-indeed it was a fantasie! Thanks for your comment.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2007 at 6:32 AM
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OTA. Thanks for reading and your comment.Much appreciaed.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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Nice poem .
posted by
afzal50
on March 17, 2007 at 6:18 AM
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i like to think
i like to think that it wasn't a fantasy at all... a phone number on the nightstand, perhaps????
posted by
jake_tullos
on March 17, 2007 at 5:26 AM
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a delightful
bottle of fun on this page..
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 17, 2007 at 4:56 AM
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