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Thanks very much, Chris and OTA - mega!
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 17, 2007 at 4:59 PM
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Tony
very cool writing!!!
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 17, 2007 at 4:07 AM
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Hi Tony.Excellant piece of writing!! The tragedy is it's here with us---
but you have captured it so very well! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on March 17, 2007 at 3:53 AM
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Ta, fwends. Goin' aht nah - see ya lay-ah, awoit?
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 17, 2007 at 1:39 AM
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Tonyzonit
Dang Tony, you da man rappin' like dat bro.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 16, 2007 at 10:47 PM
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Ha Tawh ny! Exz hell ent !! Marvhe loz!!!
Loved the accent so much, true story notwithstanding, it tells also so much of your funny side up.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 16, 2007 at 6:13 PM
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I like this new style .
posted by
afzal50
on March 16, 2007 at 5:48 PM
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Not easy to keep the dialect consistent unless like Tonyzonnet, we know it
Interesting; illuminating; refreshing what U did with this form. Like Walt Whitman and Carl Sandburg in one respect at least.
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 16, 2007 at 5:27 PM
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Thanks Kabu and Troosha - glad u could understand the accent!
This was inspired by a true sad story of a young boy knifed to death by a gang of schoolkids on Wednesday in London.
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 16, 2007 at 3:28 PM
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Are you turning into a gangster on us.?
Great twist on words - I found myself falling right into the accent.
posted by
Troosha
on March 16, 2007 at 3:10 PM
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omg that's scary and the language so well done.
posted by
Kabu
on March 16, 2007 at 3:08 PM
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