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                    Great
                
                I love the flow of this, and the darkness portrayed in it, stark and upfront. Wonderful.
                
                    posted by
                    NightMajik
                     on March 21, 2007 at 7:18 AM
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                    Controlled.  To be or not to be...  Well done.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    saul_relative
                     on March 12, 2007 at 10:03 AM
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                    Sexy
                
                and dangerous. What a wonderful combination. The only thing missing is more. I want to see what else you want in this work.
                
                    posted by
                    ModernBoz
                     on March 11, 2007 at 7:38 PM
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                only one fault in your line i could find.you cannot be raped,you are always willing to your love.
rithwik.lancs
                
                    posted by
                    rihwik.lancs
                     on March 10, 2007 at 11:34 PM
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