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I like it.

It's a little creepy, but in a good way. It's like the character has become detached but is trying not ot be. I especially like your description of the music once being happy but losing hope. Funny how life is like that and tragic that life is that way so often. I like your contradictions too; obsurity and significance; knowing and the unknown. Sometimes, life really seems that way. An interesting read to be sure! --And ModernBoz always has great things to say, doesn't he?

posted by Jennett_Kaerie on April 5, 2007 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you ModernFreud - I always love your comments.

posted by slakesphere on March 8, 2007 at 11:49 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on March 8, 2007 at 2:08 PM | link to this | reply

Correction

I forgot to mention the statues dying. Now those actually are signs of human life outside the speaker, but that human life is not flesh, and I believe the speaker is a vessel of flesh-influenced sensations. Quite intriguing.

posted by ModernBoz on March 8, 2007 at 2:43 AM | link to this | reply

Dream on

Very hypnotic and nightmarishly comforting. I especially liked the falling, splashing books in slow-motion. I also noticed that pretty much everything experienced in this story is a color or object, but no sense of human companionship existing outside the speaker. Very alone. This is what I see, in any road.