Go to ~You give me the line ~*~ I'll give you the rhyme~
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- Go to SWEET HOME---- inspired by a line from Tonyzonit
thanks richinstore and tonzonit - btw, tony...
the best characters are the real ones!
that poem is 100% non-fiction!
posted by
JustJilly
on March 5, 2007 at 4:16 AM
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hi Bubbagirl,
nice poem.
posted by
richinstore
on March 4, 2007 at 5:51 PM
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Hi BubbaGirl - thanks for the plug.
This deserves more readers. Sometimes at the weekend it can be a bit quiet. I thought this was a neat study of human behaviour,; I actually believed in the characters! Congratulations on a great piece.
posted by
Antonionioni
on March 4, 2007 at 12:32 PM
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day is splendid,only because there is night.
rithwik
posted by
rihwik.lancs
on March 4, 2007 at 9:59 AM
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