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thanks richinstore and tonzonit - btw, tony...

the best characters are the real ones!

that poem is 100% non-fiction!

posted by JustJilly on March 5, 2007 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

hi Bubbagirl,
nice poem.

posted by richinstore on March 4, 2007 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

Hi BubbaGirl - thanks for the plug.
This deserves more readers. Sometimes at the weekend it can be a bit quiet. I thought this was a neat study of human behaviour,; I actually believed in the characters! Congratulations on a great piece.

posted by Antonionioni on March 4, 2007 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

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day is splendid,only because there is night.

rithwik


posted by rihwik.lancs on March 4, 2007 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply