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Thanks shypettite :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 2, 2007 at 3:31 PM
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posted by
shypettite
on March 2, 2007 at 4:32 AM
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Thanks Bhas and LadyCee :)
posted by
Discombobulated78
on March 1, 2007 at 9:50 AM
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Thanks for sharing this.....with all
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 1, 2007 at 7:53 AM
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Dis-
Yes, but in it's conciseness and simplicity, it takes on a different meaning, I think. Good post!
Ladyceemarie
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on February 28, 2007 at 8:21 PM
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Thanks afzal and Tony, I think I'll keep them as part one and part two
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 28, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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Yes, Discom, the second version is definitely better - well done.
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 28, 2007 at 8:27 AM
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Lovely words .
posted by
afzal50
on February 28, 2007 at 3:10 AM
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