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very sensual.. I liked these

posted by Blue_feathers on February 26, 2007 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Bhaskar and afzal

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 26, 2007 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

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The pounding by the rhythmic waters of the ocean is a lovely thought coloured by feelings of the sensuous. Well done.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on February 26, 2007 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

Extremely nice .

posted by afzal50 on February 26, 2007 at 12:04 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks star :)

posted by Discombobulated78 on February 25, 2007 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on February 25, 2007 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply