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Interesting indeed...
Perhaps I should indeed try the simple 'said'. I avoid it because it looks so plain after a while, but maybe there is a simplicity to it that I could use. Thanks, mryan author.
posted by
ModernBoz
on February 24, 2007 at 3:16 AM
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Interesting
I agree, the last sentence is very good. A little improvement is needed in the dialogue tags area, specifically sometimes just using "said" works. It seems like you never use it, and it becomes noticeable.
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mryan_author
on February 23, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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"Not all magic is born from stars."
Loved the last sentence. I've never been able to write short shorts...they always turn into novelettes. You seem to have it down, though.
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Jadelynn
on February 23, 2007 at 5:36 AM
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