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                    afzal50, Kat02, Discombobulated78, star4you
                
                    Thank you for your comments!
  afzal50 - Thanks~ <3
  Kat02 - Thank you so much for commenting. ^_^ I am glad the love and care made it across.
  Discombobulated78 - Thank you, I drifted away from rhyme for a long time, I have begun to play with it more now, though. I'm glad you enjoyed this!
  star4you - Thank you my dear~~
                
                    posted by
                    NightMajik
                     on February 26, 2007 at 4:46 AM
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                    beautiful
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    star4sky5
                     on February 22, 2007 at 10:15 PM
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                    Ooooh I love the rhyme in this!
                
                And the word unburden is unusual. 
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Discombobulated78
                     on February 22, 2007 at 10:07 PM
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                    Night
                
                    very loving and caring poem  
  
                
                    posted by
                    Kat02
                     on February 22, 2007 at 5:58 PM
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                    Touching poem.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on February 22, 2007 at 9:03 AM
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