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Very interestingly, well ...confidently explained. I agree, was just imagining...after Justi left you that comment.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 23, 2007 at 6:45 PM
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Interesting Bhaskar...
I combed my poem for the world "wild" but didn't find it, which makes me wonder if what I'm seeing on the screen is different from what is actually posted (somehow) because in the first rough draft of this poem (like, in the first two minutes of writing it) the word "wild" was in place of "free" but I changed it to "free" for accuracy, for one, and two, because wild doesn't have much impact, in my opinion. Do a word association with the word wild and I bet you most people will say "animals", it's so automatic. "Free" is a bit tired as well but it's more accurate, and still an intriguing concept to me.
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 23, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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Discombobulated
How would ity be if that word 'wild' is replaced by 'mild'? Your style and your smile...beautifully poetic.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 23, 2007 at 4:00 AM
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Justi, LOL!
I'll take that as as compliment!
posted by
Discombobulated78
on February 22, 2007 at 8:07 PM
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I like your poetry. I think your sex is a bit wild for little old ladies.
posted by
Justi
on February 22, 2007 at 6:02 PM
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Lovely words .
posted by
afzal50
on February 22, 2007 at 1:30 AM
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