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Nice Poem
Good Work!

posted by jasoncaron on March 1, 2007 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply

You end the poem sounding quite 'despondent'? Be proud that she is growing
steadily and in sefty and wise parenting.Lovely.Chris.

posted by Scramble on February 22, 2007 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

That's good, Celeste - it's best to accept that they are independent
(except financially) from quite a young age.

posted by Antonionioni on February 21, 2007 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply