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Hi
this is so long ago I forgot about it. It's tough getting stories on the net as people always want video. But I'm working on the idea of narrating the stories on YouTube to a slide show. Steve.
posted by
slam
on March 6, 2011 at 2:05 AM
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Once again, I really like the content, but I think DM has a point. It's as if we are missing info.
posted by
adnohr
on March 5, 2011 at 3:22 PM
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I'm Sorry...
but your story left me a little confused on how they siphoned the money from the account. Maybe you could rewrite and make it a little clearer?
DM
posted by
Dennison..Mann
on April 8, 2006 at 7:14 PM
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Yes, I enjoyed it too.
posted by
Yasmeen
on December 7, 2002 at 9:41 PM
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Well-written!
I enjoyed the story; the description of the factory was my favorite part, since it felt very real.
In the last paragraph, I really liked the idea of valuable information being printed on the machines. My practical side wonders, though, how did having the account name help him get the money? 
posted by
Humayun
on December 7, 2002 at 1:45 PM
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