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                    afzal50, richinstore, star4you
                
                    afzal50 - As always, thank you so much for your comments.
  richinstore - Thanks for commenting. As for the last line, I try to hold everything important inside of my heart and soul, even if it's as flimsy but as precious as a memory.
  star4you - Thank you. Truth, the ultimate truth, is what I strive for in poetry.
                
                    posted by
                    NightMajik
                     on February 16, 2007 at 7:25 AM
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                    truthful
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    star4sky5
                     on February 11, 2007 at 7:26 PM
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                    NightMajik, will you?
                
                ... i'm referring to the last line of your poem. Nice poem though.
 
                
                    posted by
                    richinstore
                     on February 11, 2007 at 7:13 AM
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                    Nostalgic poem.Well written .
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on February 11, 2007 at 6:36 AM
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