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afzal50, richinstore, star4you

afzal50 - As always, thank you so much for your comments.

richinstore - Thanks for commenting. As for the last line, I try to hold everything important inside of my heart and soul, even if it's as flimsy but as precious as a memory.

star4you - Thank you. Truth, the ultimate truth, is what I strive for in poetry.

posted by NightMajik on February 16, 2007 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

truthful

posted by star4sky5 on February 11, 2007 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

NightMajik, will you?
... i'm referring to the last line of your poem. Nice poem though.

posted by richinstore on February 11, 2007 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

Nostalgic poem.Well written .

posted by afzal50 on February 11, 2007 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply