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I enjoyed your turtle story very much...
You have a catchy writing style but it was hard to read. Might I suggest dividing the text into smaller paragraphs and separating them with double spaces?
You can also use larger or different type styles which make it somewhat easier and more fun to read.
I look forward to your next "Turtle Tale".
posted by
Passionflower
on February 10, 2007 at 10:14 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on February 9, 2007 at 6:21 PM
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