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Passionflower-perhaps you are right--or--on the other hand it could be
we have personally experienced it? Thanks for your comment.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 8, 2007 at 5:35 AM
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I was once this way too...
Maybe I am still in some ways...very suspicious of any man who is nice to me. do you think we just see too much lying, cheating, flakiness in the world? It's hard not to be jaded.
posted by
Passionflower
on February 7, 2007 at 10:28 AM
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Hallo R.I.--It seemed peacefull--but it seemed to be 'making comparisons?'-
The only 'scarey' thing about it was that I have over all these years,made so many bad choices-well-not choices really-just positions/lives I seemed to step into.Shadow left me feeling a bit 'wimsickle'? but-I would not change the past in those terms-because of my lovely sons.Chris.Thank you for your comment-made me think a bit more.
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 1:34 PM
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Chris, I guess sometimes shadows can be scary and sometimes
peaceful presences..did you sense a bit of both in this one?? it was like a visitation by the sounds of it..
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posted by
Rumor
on February 4, 2007 at 1:12 PM
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Kat--thank you very much-as usual you have 'diciphered' it all.
Hope I've said that right-I mean-you know me so well! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 11:21 AM
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afzal50--thanks very much. Chris
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 11:19 AM
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mobedder--thank you very much. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 11:18 AM
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drohan254--many thanks for your comments-much appreciated.
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 10:54 AM
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Thank you for your comment-food4thought.It's 'fleeting'--
there was absolutely no need for 'forging him'.(possibly to forgive myself for letting him down for the wrong reason?)Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 10:53 AM
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ROSE-PETAL--thank you so much for your kind words.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 4, 2007 at 10:51 AM
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Chris
It is such a shame you could not tell the difference because you had been treated so badly before, But this was simply a beautiful and warm poem , Thank you for sharing this with us
posted by
Kat02
on February 4, 2007 at 10:00 AM
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It's simply a nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on February 4, 2007 at 4:39 AM
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How nice it is
to have memories to inspire us, warm us, teach us...this is well done.
posted by
mobedder
on February 4, 2007 at 4:18 AM
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beautiful feeling scramble
posted by
drohan254
on February 3, 2007 at 7:03 PM
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Memory...
Is it fleeting or forgiving? I like the mood you set.
posted by
food4thought
on February 3, 2007 at 6:41 PM
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Very Nice
I like the way you write and the way you use words.I enjoyed it very much.
posted by
ROSE-PETAL
on February 3, 2007 at 5:15 PM
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