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FreeManWalking
It was worth a second read.

posted by TAPS. on January 23, 2008 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks shortskirts - I hang out in shady places I suppose. As for Maze Dog
I'll see her today at my parents house

posted by FreeManWalking on May 6, 2007 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Oh! the places you go................ yikes!
BTW - the picture on your profile page rocks - but I'm missing the dog!

posted by shortskirtsrkewl on May 6, 2007 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

"what does today bring that isn’t destroyed by the afternoon?"
FANTASTIC

posted by Lotusblossom on April 28, 2007 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

Gosh , I think I want to go hide in a safe corner and cry!

posted by Holy_Grail on March 2, 2007 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful stuff

posted by star4sky5 on February 15, 2007 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

You've always been my poetic inspiration.
I think you said once about one of my pieces that it was better than anything that could you read in school... I'm going to return the favor here.  You never cease to amaze me with where your mind wanders and what you put together.  I'd read you over the classics any day.  xo~w

posted by Temple on February 7, 2007 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

gosh.. had to read it again

posted by Blue_feathers on February 2, 2007 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Free
 Excellent it was a little long but worth the time to read

posted by Kat02 on February 2, 2007 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Onetimeagain - I decided it was time to write a long poem

posted by FreeManWalking on February 2, 2007 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks TAPS - I figured if T.S. Eliot could be obscure I could too

posted by FreeManWalking on February 2, 2007 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Freeman

wow!!!!

Im sort of wordless.... this is awesome

posted by Blue_feathers on February 2, 2007 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

FreeManWalking
What a magnificent tale of humanness and the human spirit striving to live in a time and place it does not understand, with questions that refuse to be answered.  This is very special. 

posted by TAPS. on February 2, 2007 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply