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i AGREE WITH kAT (BUT NOT MY OR KAT'S BIRTHDAY. ONE CLICK ONLY.LOL)
The poem has power, and usually personal experience and dreams do have this magic. My one advice is to avoid punctuation//break lines where you need a comma, and the poem will flow with more smoothness. Throw away the advice if U r not looking for such. Shalom my brother. Neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 3, 2007 at 7:52 AM
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Sail
This poem is very powerful, Deep from with in good post
posted by
Kat02
on February 2, 2007 at 9:34 AM
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