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thanks for being there.

posted by star4sky5 on February 1, 2007 at 10:29 PM | link to this | reply

Shadow pen,
I've always enjoyed reading your poems.

posted by richinstore on February 1, 2007 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

Shelley - Appreciate you stopping by and for your warm comment..
I am a Shakesspeare fan and always loved his sonnets. Will post some more....

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha - What a graceful comment coming from you....
a wonderful poet close to my heart...I am honoured...thanks.

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

Kat- I wouldn't want to change you in any other way either...
you're a winner yourself !

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

Mobedder -I read your comment softly, aloud, three times.......
and want to thank you twice as much for your kind words. It gave me a warm feeling of being appreciated....

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

Passion - What wouldn't I give to serenade to you...
holding you in my arms...I decided to give up the Comet idea....and take a magical carpet ride to Dallas.....see yah!

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

star - thanks for stopping by to have a read....I welcome your comment..

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply

Drohan -thanks , your comment is absolutely true....
Does someone hold the key to your heart? Someone you trust?

posted by shadow-pen on February 1, 2007 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

very beautiful shadow ..last two line is with so much meaning
the key will be given always to whom could be trasted to whom will fill what behind the door with love and care ....for one who will put the key in the mind and the heart ...the one who will never loose the key ......who able to keep it new key inspite of the years and the tears which will passed by

posted by drohan254 on February 1, 2007 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

shadow, you got it passions proposal

posted by star4sky5 on January 31, 2007 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

This is a sweet melody of love...
Maybe you'll sing it to me on our date.

posted by Passionflower on January 31, 2007 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

You wonderful poet you!
You did it again! I read this softly, aloud, three times...and I STILL have chills!! I really love your talented soul!

posted by mobedder on January 31, 2007 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

Shadow
I would not add a thing or take away a word from this poem totally beautiful

posted by Kat02 on January 31, 2007 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful, Shadow! To say any more would be less.

posted by Troosha on January 31, 2007 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Very Well Said. shadow-pen, a style turly your own.....
I favored your ending lines.  Refreshing.  Keep sharing. Oh and thank you for the wonderful comment on "Forever Special", much appreciated   Shelley

posted by Justlife on January 31, 2007 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply