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                    afzal50, As always, thank you.
  topcat79, thank you so much!
  Shams-i-Heartsong, thank you for the comment, I think you are right in that some things that we can tell--we realize they shouldn't be told at all. Very perceptive of you, thank you.
  richinstore, thank you!
  star4you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
  Kat02, I try to put a lot into my poetry, adding layers, so I'm glad that depth came across, thank you.
  mobedder, thank you so much, that means a lot.
  ClareHill, what a wonderful comment, thank you muchly.
  sailheat, this is a precious comment, that you gain things from my writing. Thank you so much.
                
                    posted by
                    NightMajik
                     on February 1, 2007 at 9:35 PM
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                    A Master in this!
                
                You know? Each time you write, I gain some things. You thought me some sonnet. Keep it up. You're a master in this!
                
                    posted by
                    sailheat
                     on February 1, 2007 at 5:34 AM
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                    Keep telling...
                
                because you're good at it. Lovely poem.
                
                    posted by
                    ClareHill
                     on January 31, 2007 at 1:01 PM
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                    Very, very beautiful...
                
                while sharing your depths. Well done...and continue to share because we enjoy! 

 
 
                
                    posted by
                    mobedder
                     on January 31, 2007 at 11:42 AM
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                    Night
                
                    This poem was very beautiful yet so deep  
  
                
                    posted by
                    Kat02
                     on January 31, 2007 at 11:27 AM
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                    so beautiful
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    star4sky5
                     on January 31, 2007 at 10:17 AM
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                    Nice poem, Night Majik
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    richinstore
                     on January 31, 2007 at 7:23 AM
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                    Sounds like you can tell but are wise enough not to
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Shams-i-Heartsong
                     on January 31, 2007 at 7:19 AM
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                an amazing piece of writing!
                
                    posted by
                    topcat79
                     on January 31, 2007 at 6:37 AM
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                    Lovely poem .
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on January 31, 2007 at 6:02 AM
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