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Thank you so much Neil--I think it might have been my-'fantasy self'?Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 31, 2007 at 8:39 AM
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Hallo Kat--thank you for your comment.
Yes-certainly written from the heart---but possibly-the 'secret self?'Thanks again.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 31, 2007 at 8:36 AM
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Troosha-thanks for your comment--no actually-
the guy I was with--so screwed up at the time-(much like myself in those days)-did not accept 'Valentine's Day'-neither could he show emotions etc.etc.And I must add-it was very difficult for me too-and mostly-I could not show my emotions-only by writing-he had difficulty reading---guess it was a bad match.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 31, 2007 at 8:35 AM
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Thank you Tony--Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 31, 2007 at 8:31 AM
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Chris
This is so very beautiful and filled with love written from with in the heart Wonderfully written
posted by
Kat02
on January 30, 2007 at 6:24 PM
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short and very sweet
Echoes to the other questions already posed. Best wishes, Neil.
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 30, 2007 at 4:22 PM
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Scramble
Did the object of your affection receive the poem? How could she not have loved it....
posted by
Troosha
on January 30, 2007 at 4:10 PM
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Chris, this is indeed a lovely thought as we approach Valentine's Day!
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 30, 2007 at 2:07 PM
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Rumoured Intelligence-thank you so much for your welcome comment.
Actually-I entered a comp;for a valentine's greetings and was lucky enough to win! My prize was a beautifull set of champagne glasses plus small bottle champers-AND-they turned it into a one off Valentine's Card! I've still got it-after all these years.(Sentimental ol' thing I am.)
posted by
Scramble
on January 30, 2007 at 1:16 PM
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Shado-pen--thank you so much for your lovely comment.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 30, 2007 at 1:13 PM
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afzal50-thank you for your comment.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 30, 2007 at 1:12 PM
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One Time Again-thanks for your comment-personally I have never heard the
quote--I willtry to find it.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 30, 2007 at 1:11 PM
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Chilitree--thank you for the roses and 'smilie'.Chris.
one for you.
posted by
Scramble
on January 30, 2007 at 1:09 PM
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Chris, this would make an excellent Valentine's Day card...
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posted by
Rumor
on January 30, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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Scramble - I would never disagree with someone expressing
such beautiful words on behalf of love & romance. Beautifully done .
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 30, 2007 at 6:49 AM
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Lovely poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 30, 2007 at 6:14 AM
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there is a quote that I am reminded of here
and I am going to have to look for it..but it goes along the lines of love being one heart in two bodies.. very nice.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 30, 2007 at 3:26 AM
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posted by
Chilitree
on January 30, 2007 at 3:14 AM
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