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Very heavy material....Welcome to Blogit!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on January 24, 2007 at 6:44 AM
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GREYASHES THIS IS A VERY POWERFUL FIRST POEM
A HUGE QUESTION IN A CHILDS MIND ONE THAT CAN LEAD TO MANY UNKNOWN CONTRADICTIONS. VERY GOOD VERY WELL THOUGHT OUT.
PLEASE READ MY SHORT STORY UNDER FICTION UNDER BARBER ETC ETC IT IS ON THE SAME ISSUE.
posted by
CARMELITO
on January 22, 2007 at 10:32 PM
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Gadzooks!
I certainly hope that was NOT autobiographical.
posted by
cpklapper
on January 22, 2007 at 8:44 PM
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That sent alarm bells ringing
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2007 at 8:37 PM
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