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Shypettite - thanks for your good comments...

posted by shadow-pen on January 23, 2007 at 12:51 AM | link to this | reply

I like this one, especially the line:
"Silence replaced tears of goodbye" and" The ripples from gentle waves dies at my feet without a sound."

posted by shypettite on January 22, 2007 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

Shadow
Very deep and profound good post

posted by Kat02 on January 22, 2007 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting stuff, Shadow!

posted by Antonionioni on January 22, 2007 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on January 22, 2007 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply