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Thanks for your comments
Any suggestions are welcome. Feel free to e-mail me.
posted by
Kasthu
on January 20, 2007 at 10:47 AM
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yup...me likes so far
posted by
MiaElla
on January 20, 2007 at 9:57 AM
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Kasthu
So far, so good. I'd like to show you a few things you can do to improve it. Let me know.
posted by
Talion
on January 19, 2007 at 2:32 PM
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Kasthu
Would you like me to email my comments on your story?
I've had a lot of stuff published, but I'm not a pro author.
I did notice one mistake tho' " bear" instead of " beer" Editors hate spelling mistakes, altho' if the story's good it won't mater too much..
posted by
ariel70
on January 19, 2007 at 2:26 PM
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