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it's so beautiful....
posted by
star4sky5
on January 18, 2007 at 11:29 PM
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posted by
shypettite
on January 18, 2007 at 6:21 PM
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Your words are very tender and true coming from your warmness written with loyalty and faithness your lines washed me from my sad thoughts .........there are in your ink one tear and hope ,,,,
,,,,,,,I love what you wrote,
,,the stranger,,,,,,,,najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on January 18, 2007 at 5:27 PM
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Yes, Shadow, I echo the previous comments!
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 18, 2007 at 3:51 PM
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Shadow
Such deep love yet such sadness at the same time. “Perhaps I should try not to remove your veil” – sometimes that’s what we want. Sometimes we want someone who has the courage to see behind the façade. Beautiful poem, Shadow.
posted by
Troosha
on January 18, 2007 at 11:07 AM
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the "silent shrine of your heart"..just one of many great lines here
shadow..
..not overlooking the title, which is the best.
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posted by
Rumor
on January 18, 2007 at 9:12 AM
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shadow-pen-this is really lovely.
posted by
Scramble
on January 18, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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some time what behind the veil is more beautiful
than our expectation and if not we have to be prepared to accept any result if itis true feelings
posted by
drohan254
on January 18, 2007 at 8:40 AM
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It's really very beautiful.
posted by
afzal50
on January 18, 2007 at 8:18 AM
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