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posted by
star4sky5
on January 18, 2007 at 11:43 PM
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Thank you Troosha
Thank you Troosha I have now changed my poem to 'sitting' and it does sound much better thanks again.
posted by
netty21
on January 18, 2007 at 11:39 PM
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Netty
Time can pass so quickly – sometimes we don’t even notice it. If I can make one grammatical suggestion: “I’m sitting here watching” rather than “sat”. Otherwise it’s a very rhythmic, nice flowing poem on time.
posted by
Troosha
on January 18, 2007 at 3:12 PM
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Netty
Nicely done
posted by
Kat02
on January 18, 2007 at 12:51 PM
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Netty,
The poem is lovely.
posted by
mirash88
on January 18, 2007 at 12:10 PM
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I think we all know
exactly what you are talking about.
Nice poem
Rose:)
posted by
RoseDempsey
on January 18, 2007 at 9:24 AM
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I AM LIVING IT TOO RITE NOW ???? I think our souls are speaking around the Global ..............for sure but we write to get over it too.....
.......the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on January 18, 2007 at 6:40 AM
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Very good!
I've felt like this SO many times in my life.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 18, 2007 at 6:16 AM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 18, 2007 at 6:14 AM
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