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                    Thank you
                
                    afzal50 - Thank you. The last line... yeah that's the clincher isn't it? It sounds really simple, and yet, impossible.
  Ted_William, Kat02, mirash88 - Thank you very much for the comments, this was written in a half-crazy state, I am glad it still got through to people regardless of my state at the time. =p
                
                    posted by
                    NightMajik
                     on January 17, 2007 at 6:44 AM
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                    Night,
                
                I like much what you wrote.
 
                
                    posted by
                    mirash88
                     on January 16, 2007 at 1:23 PM
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                    Night
                
                    very well said   
                
                    posted by
                    Kat02
                     on January 16, 2007 at 9:48 AM
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                    Nice illustration!
                
                     
  
                
                    posted by
                    teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
                     on January 16, 2007 at 9:26 AM
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                    Lovely expression .The last line does make great sense .
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on January 16, 2007 at 8:31 AM
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