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Thank you

afzal50 - Thank you. The last line... yeah that's the clincher isn't it? It sounds really simple, and yet, impossible.

Ted_William, Kat02, mirash88 - Thank you very much for the comments, this was written in a half-crazy state, I am glad it still got through to people regardless of my state at the time. =p

posted by NightMajik on January 17, 2007 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

Night,
I like much what you wrote.

posted by mirash88 on January 16, 2007 at 1:23 PM | link to this | reply

Night
very well said

posted by Kat02 on January 16, 2007 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Nice illustration!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 16, 2007 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely expression .The last line does make great sense .

posted by afzal50 on January 16, 2007 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply