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Your poem is very good, star
All of those comments, wondering who the shy and secret lover is and whether you were alright, are a clear testament to the powerful emotions you drew forth with your words.
Keep up the good work, cooking or whatever you are doing now.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on January 18, 2007 at 11:24 AM
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very nice
posted by
netty21
on January 15, 2007 at 11:18 PM
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moon, it was simply a poem,,,,,,,,
posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2007 at 9:58 PM
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star
great post always enjoy your words
posted by
SoloVale
on January 15, 2007 at 9:58 PM
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...if only they will say it like it is....not too much to ask. MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on January 15, 2007 at 9:54 PM
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaha najwa, I was writing a poem.............that'a all.
posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2007 at 9:24 PM
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I hope you are home soon.
posted by
afzal50
on January 15, 2007 at 2:37 PM
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Hi Star4you, honest enjoyable and romantic
Verse! Thank you for posting
posted by
lionladroar
on January 15, 2007 at 12:00 PM
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Star
posted by
Kat02
on January 15, 2007 at 10:55 AM
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naj, this is a poem.....i am not searching. i amk cooking lunch
posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2007 at 10:10 AM
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are you searshing for love??? it could be rite beside you between now and then I wish I can help you ,,,,,,,
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,,,,,,,,,but it is sad I want your smile back sister
the stranger......najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on January 15, 2007 at 10:08 AM
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hey........
posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2007 at 9:50 AM
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searching all the time is very painful
the thing which we search forhas yo be there waiting us if realy itis for us
posted by
drohan254
on January 15, 2007 at 9:08 AM
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ANOTHER MYSTERY.....DON'T KNOW WHY........BUT VOICE OF HEART
posted by
star4sky5
on January 15, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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