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Beautiful, my friend....
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 2, 2007 at 4:10 PM
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Hope you're OK.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on February 20, 2007 at 3:30 AM
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Thanks, Star4 you, Happy V.day for you, too.
posted by
shypettite
on February 14, 2007 at 6:53 PM
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happy v day
posted by
star4sky5
on February 14, 2007 at 6:42 PM
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What a pleasant read!
You cast lovely pictures into my imagination of a place far, far away.
posted by
Joe_Love
on February 11, 2007 at 2:44 PM
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I am glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting, Chilitree.
posted by
shypettite
on February 2, 2007 at 4:11 PM
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Very beautiful...
posted by
Chilitree
on February 2, 2007 at 4:08 PM
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Thank you, bwFrampton, for both.
posted by
shypettite
on February 2, 2007 at 4:02 PM
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shypetite
Wow. This is a very moving piece! I love it.
You have my attention and applause!
posted by
bwFrampton
on February 2, 2007 at 6:34 AM
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hello shypettite
posted by
richinstore
on January 29, 2007 at 7:15 AM
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it's very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on January 22, 2007 at 9:21 PM
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Shy
My apologies for taking so long to comment. This poem though, was worth the long trip to get here - for all the right reasons, it grabs one's heart. Very nice work.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on January 22, 2007 at 4:54 PM
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Thanks
posted by
shypettite
on January 22, 2007 at 6:34 AM
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Wonderful poem
for all the reasons commented before. So why am I thinking of K-mart? No matter, your blue light is far more special than theirs.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on January 20, 2007 at 3:09 PM
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.. very nice...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on January 19, 2007 at 11:31 PM
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shypettite - about yr birthday? a shy little bird whispered in my ear..
Thanks for your comment, and i'm waiting for your next poem....
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 18, 2007 at 4:17 AM
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Thank you, YPunday
posted by
shypettite
on January 17, 2007 at 3:30 PM
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Happy Birthday. Here's a real good luck charm
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 17, 2007 at 3:25 PM
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Shadow -pen, Thank you
posted by
shypettite
on January 17, 2007 at 7:39 AM
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Shypettite...HAPPY BIRTHDAY !! May it be a blessed one...
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 17, 2007 at 12:27 AM
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Hi...I'm really glad I stopped by...you rinse your soul so well...
you are welcome to sit with me on my rock at the side of the dam surrounded by mountains in my valley...where there is always another hope-filled day...
posted by
shadow-pen
on January 17, 2007 at 12:25 AM
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Star4you, thank you for reading and nice comment
posted by
shypettite
on January 16, 2007 at 9:31 AM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on January 16, 2007 at 8:35 AM
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Thank you, YPunday. Glad you step by
posted by
shypettite
on January 15, 2007 at 3:04 PM
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LOved original, evocative lines.To b alone =strength; to forgive is divine
to the new born sun,
in this place under the bridge
with a blue light at the door.
HAPPY MARTIN LUTHER KING DAY; CHARITY AND PEACE BEGINS AT HOME, IN OUR OWN ROOMS, IN OUR WORDS AND POETRY. THANK YOU. Neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on January 15, 2007 at 3:01 PM
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Brisbane artist, I am glad you liked it.-
posted by
shypettite
on January 15, 2007 at 2:51 PM
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I enjoyed it too
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on January 15, 2007 at 11:46 AM
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Thanks, Troosha.
posted by
shypettite
on January 15, 2007 at 9:29 AM
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shypettite
Soothing words of reflection, a few regrets, but mostly hope for a brighter day. I enjoy it!
posted by
Troosha
on January 15, 2007 at 9:27 AM
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Kato2, afzal50,star4you,SoloVale - Thank you for your comments.
posted by
shypettite
on January 15, 2007 at 7:50 AM
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Shy
This poem I can so relate to trying to recall the past that was so good until you realize you have to wake up to the real world wonderful post
posted by
Kat02
on January 15, 2007 at 4:46 AM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 14, 2007 at 11:19 PM
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posted by
star4sky5
on January 14, 2007 at 10:45 PM
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great refection post.
a familiar place with its good and bad ghosts ,dealing with today, waiting for tomorrow's hopes. great stuff
posted by
SoloVale
on January 14, 2007 at 10:33 PM
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