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Your poetry has nice metaphors, MiaElla.
posted by
WindTapper
on January 12, 2007 at 9:56 AM
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nicely done
love the crayon reference
posted by
SoloVale
on January 11, 2007 at 8:21 PM
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How lovely and sad....
posted by
Holy_Grail
on January 11, 2007 at 7:45 PM
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Mia
Powerful poem! I don't believe I have ever read a more descriptive work. Very good!
posted by
bwFrampton
on January 11, 2007 at 4:40 PM
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I agree with Troosha
He was a crayon
Who couldn’t exist
Inside the lines
So he colored
Everything blue
Beautiful,
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on January 11, 2007 at 2:16 PM
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Touching and well-written. Poignant was the word I was searching for.
What a strange word 'poignant' is!
posted by
Antonionioni
on January 11, 2007 at 1:22 PM
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Mia
He was a crayon
Who couldn’t exist
Inside the lines
So he colored
Everything blue
Very beautifully said!
posted by
Troosha
on January 11, 2007 at 10:59 AM
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your poem is very beautiful left me speachless to can find the best words..
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the stranger.............najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on January 11, 2007 at 10:48 AM
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Nice work.
posted by
afzal50
on January 11, 2007 at 10:45 AM
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Beautiful work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 11, 2007 at 8:33 AM
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