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katray, Troosha
Thanks for the comments you to. Katray, I have a thing about first and last lines, so I'm glad you thought this one was conclusive.
Troosha, you are very right. It was something I wrote that was very, hmm, raw. Maybe a little too raw, enough that it hurt.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 10, 2007 at 8:35 AM
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Night
No doubt that this comes from your soul. Such devotion and heartache combined.
posted by
Troosha
on January 10, 2007 at 8:20 AM
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Lovely and aching..
The last line wraps up an amazing effect.
posted by
Katray2
on January 9, 2007 at 11:58 PM
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MoonSpirit -Thanks for the beautiful comment. I had a feeling you would probably understand a good portion of where this poem came from. Just gotta hang in there, yeah?
Kat02, thank you so much. *Heartheart*
Star4you, afzal50, teddypoet, I am so happy you enjoyed this.
Some of these poems are hard to post... a little too personal. It's so wonderful to know there are people who read and enjoy... I guess it feels a little bit like shoulders to lean on? So, thank you all.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 9, 2007 at 11:47 PM
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NightMajik, I read this absorbing every nuance, becoming one with your feeling, your experience, your expression. It wasn't hard - I'm right there. Any attempt to comment with mere words will surely fail. MoonSpirit. 
posted by
syzygy
on January 9, 2007 at 7:56 PM
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Night
This poem is so wonderfully written and beautiful good post
posted by
Kat02
on January 9, 2007 at 5:37 PM
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beautiful......
posted by
star4sky5
on January 9, 2007 at 11:11 AM
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beautiful......
posted by
star4sky5
on January 9, 2007 at 11:11 AM
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Lovely poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 9, 2007 at 8:50 AM
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Dream ghost...splendid!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 9, 2007 at 7:27 AM
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