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I didn't lose my freedom..My freedom was with someone & now they left..
You're poem's very touching..

posted by deelakreme on January 23, 2007 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reminding me of honeysuckle scents.

posted by CringeintheUSA on January 12, 2007 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Freeman.. the one of you .. I guess its you..
walking on the beach in your profile.. I like that place..

posted by Blue_feathers on January 10, 2007 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply

So true, so true...
The plans we envision of our lives do become radically different.  If we're lucky, someting comes along that's better, but it's hard to let go of what we were ready for.  I like this one a lot. xo

posted by Temple on January 10, 2007 at 3:20 AM | link to this | reply

Which pic are you asking about Onetimeagain?

posted by FreeManWalking on January 9, 2007 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Freeman.. practice or whatever I liked it
.. Im nosey.. where was your pic taken if I can ask?

posted by Blue_feathers on January 9, 2007 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

Glad to hear you got your grove back
I did that also could not write to save my life with being sick and all it was just to much on me good luck my friend

posted by Kat02 on January 9, 2007 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem.

posted by afzal50 on January 9, 2007 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Blue_feathers on January 9, 2007 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Freeman, Lately Whenever I find that my thoughts are dwelling
toward the negative, I immediately replace them with the word 'income'. I repeat it over and over, 'income, income, income, income' and magically it becomes 'come in'!  Try it!  I base it on the adage that states, "Our thoughts shape our reality."

posted by mysteria on January 9, 2007 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Freeman, good to hear you're finding your groove. Poetic expression
is a great way to do so

posted by mysteria on January 9, 2007 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

Mysteria - I'm not sad...just broke. This is a think piece on the letting
go of certain plans we envisioned for or lives.  Just a writing exercise to get back in the groove. ;-)

posted by FreeManWalking on January 9, 2007 at 6:11 AM | link to this | reply

Where did your freedom run off too?
Sounds a bit on the melancholy side ... You aren't sad are you?

posted by mysteria on January 9, 2007 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply