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DO YOU STILL WANT THAT FAR KISS FOR YOUR NEW YEAR IT IS NOT TOO LATE THINK ABOUT THE STRANGER?????????najwa

posted by NAJWA on January 9, 2007 at 2:22 AM | link to this | reply

Straight to the heart.

posted by MsVision on January 9, 2007 at 1:30 AM | link to this | reply

Very interesting idea. Well done.

posted by Antonionioni on January 8, 2007 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply

Shadow
How sad but the poetry itself is a work of art. 

posted by Troosha on January 8, 2007 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

how can u be broaken hearted, if you can write so well.......it's the
incident or two........but you are not broaken heart......

posted by star4sky5 on January 8, 2007 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

Good writing.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on January 8, 2007 at 5:21 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent poem .

posted by afzal50 on January 8, 2007 at 2:29 AM | link to this | reply

nice expresion

posted by drohan254 on January 8, 2007 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

I AM SORRY FOR YOUR PAINS BUT IF SOME CLOSED THE DOOR YOU WILL FIND GOD'S WINDOW OPEN TO HIS GLORY MERCY AND THE KIND BREATH
I WISH FOR YOU THE LOVE YOU DESERVE,,,,,,,,the stranger is your friend too ,,,najwa

posted by NAJWA on January 8, 2007 at 2:11 AM | link to this | reply