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Point well taken
posted by
roadscross
on January 7, 2007 at 10:24 AM
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yes life can be painful...
but is how we deal and learn from the pain which is important.
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on January 7, 2007 at 12:53 AM
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The point of the pen is to feel,
Not always a happy ending, life and can be painful.
posted by
roadscross
on January 7, 2007 at 12:22 AM
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Solider
Very dark yet so sad you brought the emotion out in this poem 
posted by
Kat02
on January 6, 2007 at 4:45 PM
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Very deep and dark....sad, but very well written.
Keep up the good work!
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 6, 2007 at 5:41 AM
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thank you all
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on January 5, 2007 at 7:25 PM
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poetic and sad, but nicely done!
posted by
Julia.
on January 5, 2007 at 4:45 PM
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Poetic
Dark -yes - but you made the reader feel the pain. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
on January 5, 2007 at 3:08 PM
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I CAN FEEL THE HURT IN THE WOUNDS AND THE LONG ALEY OF THE DARKNESS IN THE WAR IT THE CRYING SOUL OF THE HEROES AROUND THE WORLD LIVE IN YOUR PEN,,,,
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on January 5, 2007 at 2:11 PM
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wow that seemed very dark
posted by
netty21
on January 5, 2007 at 1:41 PM
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this is a little different then my others
somewhat darker then normal
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on January 5, 2007 at 12:55 PM
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