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Poetic_Soldier, the road less travelled usually offers many good things..
things not encountered on the freeways everyone else travels.....

posted by Rumor on January 5, 2007 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

Soldier
Yes you are so very right I think it's a good quality in a Man

posted by Kat02 on January 4, 2007 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderfully done....
Keep up the great work!

posted by _Symphony_ on January 4, 2007 at 3:33 AM | link to this | reply

kat
yeah i know what you mean. not many of my friends are able to express the way that i do. my ex-wife used to tell me that i have an abilty to inspire emotion. so i figure why not use it.... right...=)

posted by Poetic_Soldier on January 4, 2007 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

this one is one of my favorites
thank you. i was a little worried when i first got on blogit, but so far you all have inspired me. thank you.

posted by Poetic_Soldier on January 4, 2007 at 3:29 AM | link to this | reply

Soldier
Wow this was really beautiful , Not to many Men can express them selfs this way , You are very talanted, Like I said before I am drawn to your poetry beacause it comes from your heart & Soul good luck my friend

posted by Kat02 on January 4, 2007 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem
I like the bit about following in another's footsteps not meaning to leave your own.

posted by cpklapper on January 3, 2007 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

When you are famous, I will quote you! Good stuff.
Find the strength inside you, To move forward on your own, Leave your past behind you, For greater things to come.

posted by roadscross on January 3, 2007 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Poetic
The age old desire to "move forward" and leave some of our heavy burdens behind.  Words gracefully placed to shape this message....

posted by Troosha on January 3, 2007 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Nice poem

posted by afzal50 on January 3, 2007 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply