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thank you all
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on January 4, 2007 at 3:27 AM
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Soldier
Truley beautiful 
posted by
Kat02
on January 4, 2007 at 2:47 AM
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Lovely poem
I particularly like this line... "Tear at the fabric that binds you to me" Wonderful.
I don't read too much rhyming poetry, maybe because when I first started writing poetry (in middle school, ahaha, some of it was terrible, let me tell you...) I always rhymed. So after rhyming so much I dreifted away from it, but lately I am starting to really enjoy it again if it's done right, and I really like how the rhyming here reads, you did a great job.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 3, 2007 at 9:04 PM
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Wonderfully written..
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 2, 2007 at 6:18 AM
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beautiful
posted by
netty21
on January 2, 2007 at 3:30 AM
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Straightforward
it not a literal meaning of the words, more the feeling that pain only is temporary.
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on January 2, 2007 at 2:19 AM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on January 1, 2007 at 7:59 PM
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Tears can be shed, but tears can be painted too, can't they?
posted by
Straightforward
on January 1, 2007 at 6:59 PM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on January 1, 2007 at 5:47 PM
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always beautiful
posted by
drohan254
on January 1, 2007 at 11:18 AM
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