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Maze?
Oh goodie! You did get another dog. Is it MazeDog or a different?
posted by
jeanniezer0
on January 9, 2007 at 11:14 PM
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posted by
star4sky5
on January 9, 2007 at 11:03 AM
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Insightful
I like the transition in this poem, from the calm to the ending when suddenly it's not such a happy, peaceful feeling anymore. I dig the air dryer comparison.
posted by
NightMajik
on January 5, 2007 at 7:01 AM
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posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 30, 2006 at 5:07 PM
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reflective
reflexive
I can actually feel your calm,
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on December 29, 2006 at 1:53 PM
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FreeManWalking...This is a beautiful poem
posted by
mysteria
on December 23, 2006 at 6:31 PM
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Very nice visuals
I can even smell the smoke from your cigarette!
posted by
MiaElla
on December 22, 2006 at 4:52 PM
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I wish you were still in Bremerton...
I would come visit you. You always have a way of keeping things simple, something I need big time right now. I can see you standing there with Mazy, things quiet. You know, I was scanning through... I just realized how much of your blog I missed. I must
really go AWOL when I disappear. I just saw that pic you called "otter dog" -- so cute. I'll have to try and catch up. Anyway, I would love that. I could really use a break.
posted by
Temple
on December 22, 2006 at 5:06 AM
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Good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on December 21, 2006 at 9:30 AM
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