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Troosha
I really appreciate hearing your thoughts. Thanks so much. It does get very hard at times.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 18, 2006 at 8:06 AM
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Sunny
Waiting and distance can take its toll. There is clear evidence of this in this poem - a poem which is slightly more powerful than your usual pieces. Albeit I read sadness and frustration, I thought it was very well done.
posted by
Troosha
on December 18, 2006 at 7:55 AM
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Thanks Moon, I know, it's just the waiting that's so hard.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 17, 2006 at 8:45 PM
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A beautiful poem, SunnyOne - try to hold on - your dream will become reality. MoonSpirit
posted by
syzygy
on December 17, 2006 at 7:16 PM
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MandaLee
Thanks so much!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 17, 2006 at 6:32 PM
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Sunny, This poem is so sweet!
posted by
Amanda__
on December 17, 2006 at 6:24 PM
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Afzal
You are right. There is only pain because of the love. Thanks Sweetie. I miss you too.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 16, 2006 at 5:35 PM
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Yet , it is this pain and mundane reality which every one craves for.
Love brings a joyful pain in life . I miss you .
posted by
afzal50
on December 16, 2006 at 5:29 PM
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Bel
Thanks. It is very sad.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 16, 2006 at 5:00 PM
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Sunny
This is very sad.

posted by
bel_1965
on December 16, 2006 at 4:58 PM
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