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Thank you so much TAPS for your kind words friend!

The writings of the creation of the heavens and earth by our Father and Mother, The Great Creator are seldom told, I have noticed, mostly we are told of the deeds and miracles of their beloved son Jesus, our great teacher of being, and his sacrifice here on earth for our sins. . . Our Savoir!! Why do you think he took up this great burden?

For his love for mankind, Jesus in Heaven as an angel is named Michael, I am blessed with the same name. . But am no angel , . .,. more of a fool and teller of stories , this one being true as The Great Creator is my witness and may strike me dead. . Though not word for word, but true. . After Eve was tempted and broke our Fathers heart in breaking then the only rule or commandment. . He loved us dearly like any Mother or Father does or should love their children Son and Daughter. . . Us allowing ourselves to be tempted by the spoilt child Satan, after giving Satan from time beginning everything and then. . . The Us following Satans disloyal ways sent our mother and father into rage, and if not spoken and calmed by the angel Michael. . . Maybe our Creator would have taken back all that was given. . Not just Eden. . Our very existence ?. . So on and on man and woman went, populating our Creators earth our new harsh home compared to Eden, us the rebel children now finding just how harsh a reality life outside the nest is. . . From walking paradise Heaven on earth with our Father loving . .  The Us. . Telling how things are and were created and also why. . . For all of The Us, in return for Our Father Which Is In Heaven,Hallowed be thy name. . .  LOVE him for all that as been given, like we breve air our Creator breves LOVE. . . Thanks TAPS for calling keep dancing my friend.    Mike x  

posted by lionladroar on December 17, 2006 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply

lionladroar
What pictures you create, both with your colorful art and with your words. 

posted by TAPS. on December 17, 2006 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Hi MysticGmekeepr! I should be thanking you mam!
For entering my soul with your magical words, of patience, like the seasons. One will only come in its time. You my favorite poet, that I have ever read. Whom writes truly from her poet soul and if the ink as run dry and will not be replemished for sometime. Then the said poet will sit till it flows once more! Never being influenced by first and rushing words that don't sit with her heart full of all that is meek! Again MysticGmekeepr thank you!  Michael  

posted by lionladroar on December 16, 2006 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

I hope they did Tony!

I love adventure, always have, a good story spoken by one whom can tell a tale. The first few chapters of the Bible are magnificent ! Ones ear must be open, clean it of wax and street- cread ?

The war in the heaven's between those angels whom stood fast with the Creator of all things of dust and soul and freewill.. . . He whom is the only good. . . God. . . Always fighting jealously, because all belongs to Nothing, that what he has Created and gave away, only asking payment in love! . . . Understanding only after the mistake of seeking what. . .  We were forbidden ? Knowledge. For like a child crying out for comfort. . Comfort was given, the Great Creator walked and hugged his child, told of his deeds and his mystery, at the right pace for the childs years and ears!. . . All was love. . In helping our Father and Mother the Creator. . . In the garden all feed upon, the Creators milk in green-food. . .  Plant . . Though alive and only through his love. . .  Alive with what we needed for . . The us! . . All earth was created for The us!. . . A place of love and understanding where we had our loving tasks in looking after our Father and Mothers Creations. . Animals whom loved The us. . . So we could feel how the Great Creator felt. . . In The us. . . Loving . . OUR CREATER!  Our mother and father.. . . .

Weak though in the jealous eyes of one!

He the first creation from Nothing. . .Satan. . . He whom was the right hand of our Father and Mother. . . Satan . . . The mighty first Jeweled Angel. . . Created by the Nothing. . .   Asked all Created before. . . The us. . On Earth . . All angels why. . . After so many eternities.. . . Gifted to Satan and you, the mighty angels. . . Whom are bright with wisdom and strength. . . Servants of the Creator. . .  Are! Cast aside for these Humankind ?

Angels thought on Satan's words in jealously! Satan unlike . . . The Great Creator whom at all times, battles jealousy so not taking out wrath willy-nilly. . . Upon all things Created, by him. . Including. .  The weak us!

So was the beginging of us tested. . . Adam and Eve . . . Hearts of  love for our Creator! Not only here on earth but also deep within our Father and Mothers house of many rooms high in the Heavens! Think upon this. . If angels have took up sword with the spoilt child named Satan, just how strong are we. . ., The us, if we chose in good deed and love!. .  Of our Father, our Creator. . ,.Sorry Tony got carried away for a moment.    Mike

posted by lionladroar on December 16, 2006 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

Mike
I want to thank you for your faithful reading of my poetry.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on December 16, 2006 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply

That's right - they bet on the wrong horse, so to speak!

posted by Antonionioni on December 16, 2006 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Tony
For your review and kind wishes Sir! I've often wondered if the angels that followed Satan and were thrown out of heaven down upon the earth made themselves Gods, or were appointed through deeds done on behalf of the dark one. Now in these times of supposingly more peaceful worship of the one true God, in what ever name he is woeshiped in, what as happened to the many Gods that were? Are they alone somewhere regretting their decision. Thanks again friend

posted by lionladroar on December 14, 2006 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

Very dramatic, Mike.
If that was Zeus talking, it really got across a complex mixture of anger and regret. It really sounded like a powerful personality, once all-powerful, now suffering a kind of slow death. On a lighter note, I hope you have a great Xmas, too - you and your nearest and dearest!

posted by Antonionioni on December 14, 2006 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply