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write more like kato2 said, loved it allllllll the way to the finish and it was a great finish, a good ending is the best thing about anything!
posted by
sneakermzp
on December 11, 2006 at 5:42 PM
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Sad until the end
then uplifting.
posted by
jollyjeff
on December 9, 2006 at 1:57 PM
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Very nice write!
posted by
Lucinda_Price
on December 2, 2006 at 7:46 PM
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Kat's
I really like the flow of this poem good work like they said you should write more often you have talent 
posted by
Kat02
on December 2, 2006 at 4:49 PM
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hey, that's cool
posted by
star4sky5
on December 2, 2006 at 6:46 AM
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SOUND WORK, NOT PUN INTENDED
I like your work, you should write more often...
posted by
FARSAILOR
on December 2, 2006 at 6:31 AM
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Wonderfull
I really like your poetry they are all so very well done
posted by
SoloVale
on December 2, 2006 at 6:10 AM
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