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What a wonderful tapestry of the power, purpose, and importance of water. Would there be life without it?
posted by
Troosha
on December 1, 2006 at 11:27 AM
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Nicely done
Water may verywell be the most valuable element in the universe, how few can see the treasure we have here on earth.
posted by
SoloVale
on December 1, 2006 at 3:53 AM
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I READ BUT MY EYES CRYING AND NONE HERE CAN EXPLAIN WHY MAN HAS THE POWER IN EVERY THING???????????? IF THE WOMAN IS THE MOTHER AND CAN BE THE LOVER SHE CAN BE THE MISTRESS AND THE WIFE SHE CAN BE EVIL AND THE ANGEL SO HOW COME THE MAN CAN MAKES HER CRY AND THINKING TO DIE?????????????????najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on December 1, 2006 at 12:46 AM
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Some nicely flowing lines there - no joke intended!
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 30, 2006 at 10:50 PM
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I agree with Afzal... very well written.
posted by
Chilitree
on November 30, 2006 at 9:30 PM
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Very good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on November 30, 2006 at 9:22 PM
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Very good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on November 30, 2006 at 9:22 PM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on November 30, 2006 at 9:22 PM
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