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Thanks gang!!!

posted by Antonionioni on November 30, 2006 at 1:32 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Tony
Different and skillful, I enjoyed, your art in verse. Always entertaining !

posted by lionladroar on November 30, 2006 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

A right good write, Tony. They're always there, foxing us with their ways.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on November 30, 2006 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Tony
Very interesting topic the one thing I never would have thought to write about good post

posted by Kat02 on November 30, 2006 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

Clever and instructive. Reminds me I tried writing one of these on homonyms

---will try to dig it out and rework. Thanks TONYZONNET!

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on November 30, 2006 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Bhaskar
for friendly feedback freely following from feelings found fully formed from following funny fast-flowing flights of fancy in fine fantastical fortuitous forms of frenetic fancy. Phew. 

posted by Antonionioni on November 30, 2006 at 5:20 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Tony

A lovely sonnet which rings true due both to its subject matter and the use of  alliterative rhyming with a pleasing effect, as in "The fair breeze blew, the white foam flew ,  The furrow followed free”  

posted by Bhaskar.ing on November 30, 2006 at 2:15 AM | link to this | reply

Merci, Blanche. Thanks Najwa - very kind!

posted by Antonionioni on November 30, 2006 at 12:59 AM | link to this | reply

HI TONY I WANTED TO TELL YOU THAT I READ IT AGAIN AND HERE IS MY NEW COMMENT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT.........................nnnnnnnnnnn

IN THE LORD WORD THAT IF THEY HAD NEVER UNDERSTOOD YOUR TONGUE SPEAK TO THEM ONE TONGUE WE ALL SHARE IT (THE LOVE LANGUEGE)...najwa

posted by NAJWA on November 29, 2006 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

Bonne nuit, Tony

posted by Blanche. on November 29, 2006 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

Zzzzzz... I'm there already. Zzzz

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

bonne nuit mon petit, fais de beaux reves.zzzzzzzzzzzz

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

I forgot La Cucuracha. Good night, bonne nuit, hasta la vista,
zdrastvitye.

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

vaya a la cama, antonio ninito. bonito.
muchos suenos.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Muchas gracias, muchacha. I feel like a cha cha myself!
Or a chihuahua. Or a baa-baa. Actually, I feel like some zzz zzz!!

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

que si!

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

Ay, caramba! Hay un mesaje electronico en mi casa! Hasta un momento!

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

tengo una pequena sorpresa por ti. en tu casa...en Inglaterra.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

De nada, senora!

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

bravo! tu es un héro!

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

Je voudrais dire 'tes,' je pense!

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

bweh oui, qu'est-ce-que tu attends pour le faire?

tes= your pronoun plural tes commentaires

tu= you only as personal pronoun singular. don't confuse the two.

toi= singular object pronoun used with conjunctions such as

pour, avec, sans, devant, et, mais, etc....

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 2:22 PM | link to this | reply

Ah oui, madame! Je dois lire tus comments dans ton courier - alors!

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

Miam! J'en veux aussi, laisse moi un gros morceau s'il-te-plait.
C'est bientot l'heure du dodo. Mon petit.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Je veux manger agneaux avec petit pois!

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 1:50 PM | link to this | reply

bon appétit!
Qu'est-ce-que tu vas manger ce soir?

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

Worse than Russian, Blanche?

That's surprising! Thanks all for commenting. I had to go and eat! I'm back now, though. MC, I'll have a look at your feedback in a few minutes. That was quick!!

Farsailor, you southerners should be a separate monarchy and leave the republican nonsense to the northerners. (Only joking!)

Thanks Najwa and Symphony and Troosha.

 

posted by Antonionioni on November 29, 2006 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply

Tonyzonit, English is hard,worse than Russian

posted by Blanche. on November 29, 2006 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

Tony

I have heard (herd) or read (red) that the English language is one of the most difficult languages to learn because of the very point you raised. 

         

posted by Troosha on November 29, 2006 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

posted by _Symphony_ on November 29, 2006 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

ENGLISH?
How about bastardized German with a bit of this and that thrown in...

From the last hold out of the Queen's English, the Deep South Sir.


posted by FARSAILOR on November 29, 2006 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply

please read feeback on your short story...

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

I BELIEVE YOU ARE VERY GOOD IN THIS POEM OF COURSE I AGREE WITH YOU
                             ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,najwa

posted by NAJWA on November 29, 2006 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

Tony, ah the English language! tell me about it!
this is fun, it has a nice flow and lilt to it. I like the way you have woven similar sounds together, you did not need to explain your intentions, anyway they were clear to me.

posted by marieclaire66 on November 29, 2006 at 11:51 AM | link to this | reply