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Brilliant loved it great write and as everyone said the last line is great 
posted by
Kat02
on November 30, 2006 at 8:48 AM
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Rock on.......
posted by
star4sky5
on November 30, 2006 at 7:45 AM
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That's a very Norman Rockwell-ish poem.
You paint an endearing scene.
posted by
Passionflower
on November 29, 2006 at 5:05 PM
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THANKS FOLKS
I would point out, that there is very little else to do at that time of day..
posted by
FARSAILOR
on November 29, 2006 at 4:54 PM
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Like Tony I really like that last line too! Very nice~
posted by
Offy
on November 29, 2006 at 1:47 PM
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A great last line - ravishing!
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 29, 2006 at 1:36 PM
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I love the final line, 'To ravishment I proceed.'
It's a great line.
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 29, 2006 at 1:34 PM
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Wow! I loved this... and you saved the best for last!
posted by
marieclaire66
on November 29, 2006 at 1:32 PM
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FARSAILOR----nice one---
I love the line-quote-"Somehow we will cope"-It feels like we all feel similar---towards Christmas?Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 29, 2006 at 12:31 PM
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IT IS SHINING WITH NEW LIGHTS ARROUND YOUR WORDS??? WELL MAY BE THE HOLY DAYS SPIRIT COMING SOON.....
.......najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on November 29, 2006 at 10:30 AM
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