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Thank you Maggie!
posted by
bel_1965
on November 21, 2006 at 8:46 PM
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bel, where has this been hiding? You should have been writing us stories all along. I'm not a critic, just a reader, but I think you did a great job. Give us more!
posted by
MaggieMae
on November 21, 2006 at 11:11 AM
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Thank you Babe
posted by
bel_1965
on November 21, 2006 at 8:27 AM
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Scary. Rings true. Veru gppd writing.
posted by
babe_rocks
on November 21, 2006 at 8:00 AM
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Katray
Thank you so much. Going back through this part I noticed about the 50th time I changed names my word didn't correct them all LOL. I also caught a couple of spelling errors I guess I need to at least edit my grammar.
I am having fun with this as the character's take me through thier journey, they always manage to surprise me.
posted by
bel_1965
on November 19, 2006 at 7:25 PM
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Wow Bel, truly powerfully good writing!
The heartbreaking terror of a condition real and possible at some point for all of us permeates strongly - as does the love between the characters. I would enjoy reading the rest of their story.
Kudos! 
posted by
Katray2
on November 19, 2006 at 7:17 PM
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