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Yes Tony well remembered friend , the beating of a drum loud was the only thing that could bring us young men back from the edge of depravity 
posted by
lionladroar
on November 2, 2006 at 1:25 PM
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boys I don't believe you....
you guys are no saint, but then... neither are we. Oh what a fallen world we live in. a little self control is in order.
posted by
marieclaire66
on November 2, 2006 at 1:15 PM
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Thanks Tony
Insight indeed, ur , yes me too , Thanks again . Mike 
posted by
lionladroar
on November 2, 2006 at 1:11 PM
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Marieclaire, you have described my poem and emotions
well friend , thank you for a great review of my poem , insightful and helpful , plus a fascinating tale of locked doors young girls and magazines , I guess we we're all searching for the flame of knowledge carnal. Our young desires fresh and fleshly griping at and taking us away from the child of yesterday, willignly most followed. Thank you again mam, for your encouragement wrapped up in your great review 
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 2, 2006 at 1:07 PM
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Teenage lust...
You can't beat it. Although I did...
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 2, 2006 at 1:01 PM
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lion,
I detect the fearful fascination of boys raging hormones... school year talk, boys in awe of mythical creature called woman. The flame image is very apt, it is burning real and yet elusive and takes on tantalizing shapes. Girls did talk too, I remember we used to lock ourselves in the old magazine room at school, stacks and stacks of old mags stored for fundraising, it was a small storeroom and we used to flick through pages with pictures in them, I cannot remember much but it was pretty harmless. I can giggle at this now. There was more innocence then since none of us were exposed to the garbage that young kids face day by day...A very original and powerful way of revisiting and sharing memories...I may be off the mark if so, tell me, I am not always very astute when it comes to understanding people's work.
posted by
marieclaire66
on November 2, 2006 at 12:17 PM
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Thank you Neil
Love the surreal photo of hedgehogs, thanks again friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 2, 2006 at 12:10 PM
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Spot on Troosha
I can still remember the embarrassment, a harmless bus ride could bring upon us early teens. 
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 2, 2006 at 12:05 PM
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Thank you Kato
I am so glad you enjoyed friend Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on November 2, 2006 at 12:00 PM
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another tantalising & promising piece. Novel images: woamn as flame?
shalom Friend; best to you and your loved ones. Neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 2, 2006 at 10:27 AM
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Ahhh.... the intensity of desire & lust within young men/boys
posted by
Troosha
on November 2, 2006 at 9:53 AM
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Mike
Very seductive and sexual loved it wonderful writing her
posted by
Kat02
on November 2, 2006 at 9:16 AM
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