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                    Ich
                
                Overall your poems are poised and artful, but when you are able to focus your emotion and paint it across the page, with specifics and clarity, your words are truly moving.  Specifically, I think Beautiful Scar and April Showers are your best from what I have read.  Not many are able to do what you did in those pieces.    
Be fine,
-smartdog
                
                    posted by
                    smartdog_670
                     on October 26, 2006 at 10:15 PM
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                    sounds really sad - but well written
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    ladychardonnay
                     on October 26, 2006 at 5:55 PM
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