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Thanks for walking the yellow leaf road with me Shy
haik on...where are you Luv?  shalom from Neil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on November 1, 2006 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

Hope you're OK.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on November 1, 2006 at 2:09 AM | link to this | reply

Shy, nicely done!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on October 29, 2006 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

i give you a cloth,

soft and fragrant with flowers;

dust away, my friend!

posted by fourcats on October 29, 2006 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

i bring you

---one of my latest --thanks for help i got from avant

humans can wave too

better to carry fronds, palms

open toward all

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on October 28, 2006 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

shy
Thank you for this one.  I needed to hear this :).

Be well,

-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on October 26, 2006 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

..so true!

posted by MasonGarrett on October 24, 2006 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

Well, since you're offering...
Very nice, Shy.

posted by Antonionioni on October 24, 2006 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

interesting senryu & especially good for couples! Shalom my friend
     

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on October 24, 2006 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting!

posted by Sabsline on October 24, 2006 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

awesome

posted by star4sky5 on October 24, 2006 at 5:56 AM | link to this | reply

leads me to think of dust specks dancing in sunlight

posted by robdon67 on October 24, 2006 at 1:24 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Kat. Isn't it too much nice words for such a short poem?

posted by shypettite on October 23, 2006 at 9:34 PM | link to this | reply

Shy
So profound so true just beautiful

posted by Kat02 on October 23, 2006 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply