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beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on October 21, 2006 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

...just relax and wait... she shows up eventually...

posted by MasonGarrett on October 21, 2006 at 1:03 AM | link to this | reply

So glad , Tony
But if you were asleep we wouldn't have got our Sonnet , no block, you came through again friend !  Mike 

posted by lionladroar on October 20, 2006 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

You wanna bet, Marie-Claire?
It's nonsense that you are better at nonsense! Oops, you've just proved it (if I'm right)! Doh...

posted by Antonionioni on October 20, 2006 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply

Tony, you cannot beat me at this... I am a natural ah ha!

posted by marieclaire66 on October 20, 2006 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Bhaskar and Marie-Claire!
Yes, M-C, I agree that trying to write some nonsense would be worth doing. I think I could do good nonsense. I certainly talk a lot of nonsense. Next week could be Nonsense Week, I feel.

posted by Antonionioni on October 20, 2006 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely done Tony!
see what happens when you squeeze the last drop of ink out of the proverbial pen. It did not even come out diluted. The interestind thing is, because you were not so concerned with "meaning" and "intent", the words flowed freely and came out to play. I suggest that you try writing nonsense (it goes against the grain I know), but you would be surprised how the words come out and speak for themselves...it is just a warm up exercise that might turn into real inspiration, it is to relax the brain...Shelve the "rubbish" and look at it later and see if there is anything of value in it.

posted by marieclaire66 on October 20, 2006 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

Tony, I've memorized it and am going off to sleep. Too good2 b true...

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 20, 2006 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for your comments, SW, C and N
I'm too lazy to get out of bed and write. If it's really good, i'll try and memorise it, and then go to sleep!!

posted by Antonionioni on October 20, 2006 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

The muses come out at night you know.....
But apparently even a blank mind at the onset created a whimisical piece.  There was ink left in the pen after all!

posted by Troosha on October 20, 2006 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

SWEET DREAMS IF YOU WILL SLEEP BUT YOU POEM FIGHTS THE SELF SLEEPING YOUR INK WILL NEVER DRY YOUR BRAIN IS PAINTING THE SKY SHINE STARS FOR ONE MORE SONG IF YOU WANT TRY......... IT IS UNIQUE TONY.......najwa

posted by NAJWA on October 20, 2006 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely

posted by coolacen on October 20, 2006 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Yeah, right about the time you are ready to drift off to sleep
Then you have to decide whether to get up and write or just go to sleep.

posted by SuccessWarrior on October 20, 2006 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply