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posted by
MasonGarrett
on October 19, 2006 at 2:40 PM
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Liked your remedies for the soul; and haiku. Why shy about haikuAbility?
good going Shy! 
Shalom, Neil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 19, 2006 at 8:46 AM
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glad you didn't delete.. let the stars go on whispering
posted by
robdon67
on October 19, 2006 at 6:32 AM
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i love it
posted by
naorem
on October 19, 2006 at 5:52 AM
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shy
I hope the stars whiper to me tonight...
posted by
Offy
on October 18, 2006 at 9:30 PM
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Fourcats,yes, it was something to laugh. I didn't even realize, that I made
mistake. It happen to me so many times. But , still, I feel that is something wrong with this small piece. Or maybe it is fine, but I don't like it so much. have a good afternoon.
posted by
shypettite
on October 18, 2006 at 10:16 AM
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hi shy. i wasn't talking about the poem itself, but the title. i think
you meant to write "poetry", not "poerty". made that "i am not dumb" line come across as kind of funny! gave me a good laugh anyway, i trip myself up like that all the time.
posted by
fourcats
on October 18, 2006 at 9:58 AM
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Dave. and fourcats, you are right. It is something wrong with this haiku.
I am going to delete it and rethink.
posted by
shypettite
on October 18, 2006 at 9:56 AM
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Enigmatic
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 18, 2006 at 7:27 AM
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unless you're going for irony, you might want to do some editing! lg
(laughing gently)
posted by
fourcats
on October 17, 2006 at 11:23 PM
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