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Thank you so much Dave I appreciate the encouragement friend
I must be honest if it wasn't for Microsoft word I really don't believe I would be showing and posting my poetry, I ' ve always written but never made time too learn i.e Spelling till three years ago. Even tho now I still make plenty of mistakes but feel confident enough to post them for the World and his mate too cast their eyes over them. Thanks again Dave 

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

And the internal rhymes, Laddo. I forgot to mention those. And the
assonance & alliteration. You always give a good sound-scape.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 16, 2006 at 10:13 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you afzal

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

You got me there Dave
Thanks mate    

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely thoughts .

posted by afzal50 on October 16, 2006 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Great word-choices Laddo. Those verbs and adjectives are working very hard.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 16, 2006 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Neil
I wish for more photos of flowers to post on your blog friend, but I will not search the net for them. Only ones I can find and take snaps of myself. Until reading your posts and admiring the colours in the flowers, there. I wasnt realy taken by the little bloming specticals, tho now I am. This evening I will go searching, seeing if I am not too late this year for some pics. Good luck to you and yours friend. Mike   

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you TAPS
For your encouragement mam, so glad you enjoy my poems friend         Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Mike. No more flowers, why Brother?

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on October 16, 2006 at 8:20 AM | link to this | reply

lionladroar, I really love the Sunday Memories and Dreams.  I can so relate.  It takes me back to my own family when I was a child and also Sundays when I was the Mom and the hostess.  Absolutely one of your best as far as I am concerned. 

posted by TAPS. on October 16, 2006 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Bhask.ing
For your encouragement friend. Mike    

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Shypettie
Thank you mam,     Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply

Lionladroar
A beautiful and poetic way of bringing the relationships of an expanding family ties together.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 16, 2006 at 12:15 AM | link to this | reply

Nice pic. The poem remaind me about my Sunday's habbits.

posted by shypettite on October 15, 2006 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

That's ok Marieclari
I don't , good luck for you and your's friend ! Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 15, 2006 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Kato, so gald you enjoyed mam !
             

posted by lionladroar on October 15, 2006 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Cheers friend for your encouragement
Thanks Tony, what ever happened to Sundays, I used to get up, with sounds of Frank Sinatra blearing out from the kitching, my mother and father giggling whilst cooking the Sunday fry-up I would be down the working men's Club with my mates Talking about Saturday's Football, usually that ment Liverpool or Leeds wining the league or cup ! Now everyboddys at work just-like Monday's, would you Adam and Eve it !   Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 15, 2006 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

Sorry Lionlad..
I don't get this one, but don't worry no one understands my poem either. It happens sometimes...Don't take it personally.

posted by marieclaire66 on October 15, 2006 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

Mike
Great writing loved it

posted by Kat02 on October 15, 2006 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

Health and safety issues at table!
A well-described complex set of relationships in very few words, I'd say. This is what poetry can do. Great stuff Mike. PS: Leaves you wanting more, too...

posted by Antonionioni on October 15, 2006 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply