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Thank you so much Dave I appreciate the encouragement friend
I must be honest if it wasn't for Microsoft word I really don't believe I would be showing and posting my poetry, I ' ve always written but never made time too learn i.e Spelling till three years ago. Even tho now I still make plenty of mistakes but feel confident enough to post them for the World and his mate too cast their eyes over them. Thanks again Dave
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 11:03 AM
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And the internal rhymes, Laddo. I forgot to mention those. And the
assonance & alliteration. You always give a good sound-scape.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 16, 2006 at 10:13 AM
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Thank you afzal
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 10:11 AM
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You got me there Dave
Thanks mate
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 10:11 AM
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Lovely thoughts .
posted by
afzal50
on October 16, 2006 at 9:32 AM
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Great word-choices Laddo. Those verbs and adjectives are working very hard.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 16, 2006 at 9:10 AM
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Hi Neil
I wish for more photos of flowers to post on your blog friend, but I will not search the net for them. Only ones I can find and take snaps of myself. Until reading your posts and admiring the colours in the flowers, there. I wasnt realy taken by the little bloming specticals, tho now I am. This evening I will go searching, seeing if I am not too late this year for some pics. Good luck to you and yours friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 8:41 AM
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Thank you TAPS
For your encouragement mam, so glad you enjoy my poems friend
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 8:32 AM
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Thanks Mike. No more flowers, why Brother?
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on October 16, 2006 at 8:20 AM
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lionladroar, I really love the
Sunday Memories and Dreams. I can so relate. It takes me back to my own family when I was a child and also Sundays when I was the Mom and the hostess. Absolutely one of your best as far as I am concerned.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 16, 2006 at 8:12 AM
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Thank you Bhask.ing
For your encouragement friend. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 5:28 AM
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Hi Shypettie
Thank you mam,
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 16, 2006 at 5:25 AM
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Lionladroar
A beautiful and poetic way of bringing the relationships of an expanding family ties together.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 16, 2006 at 12:15 AM
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Nice pic. The poem remaind me about my Sunday's habbits.
posted by
shypettite
on October 15, 2006 at 7:02 PM
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That's ok Marieclari
I don't , good luck for you and your's friend ! Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 15, 2006 at 4:03 PM
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Thank you Kato, so gald you enjoyed mam !

posted by
lionladroar
on October 15, 2006 at 4:01 PM
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Cheers friend for your encouragement
Thanks Tony, what ever happened to Sundays, I used to get up, with sounds of Frank Sinatra blearing out from the kitching, my mother and father giggling whilst cooking the Sunday fry-up I would be down the working men's Club with my mates Talking about Saturday's Football, usually that ment Liverpool or Leeds wining the league or cup ! Now everyboddys at work just-like Monday's, would you Adam and Eve it !
Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 15, 2006 at 3:58 PM
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Sorry Lionlad..
I don't get this one, but don't worry no one understands my poem either. It happens sometimes...Don't take it personally.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 15, 2006 at 3:49 PM
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Mike
Great writing loved it
posted by
Kat02
on October 15, 2006 at 2:35 PM
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Health and safety issues at table!
A well-described complex set of relationships in very few words, I'd say. This is what poetry can do. Great stuff Mike. PS: Leaves you wanting more, too...
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 15, 2006 at 11:49 AM
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