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Hi Tony
Great sounding father and son, day out at the match, with a thought at full time. Well wrote. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 10, 2006 at 12:23 PM
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Tony
You can just about write on any 'damn' thing! So nicely!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 8, 2006 at 8:23 AM
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Tony, it's hell, having the dilemma of getting milk or blogging.
posted by
Blanche.
on October 8, 2006 at 2:46 AM
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Marie-Claire
It'll be getting late now - are you still up and browsing???
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 8, 2006 at 2:40 AM
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I know, but I didn't -
...and that means that I can't have my usual breakfast of cereal and milk this morning, either!! This is why I made it the first line of the poem - because it was the main crisis in my head at the time of writing!! No milk today, my love has gone away... (Herman's Hermits)
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 8, 2006 at 2:38 AM
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Tony, I will go to great lengths to get milk for my coffee or tea.
If there's none in the house, I have to get out and get some.
posted by
Blanche.
on October 8, 2006 at 2:29 AM
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Tonyzonit, when a man wants milk for his coffee and there is none, there is no substitute that will make him happy.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 7, 2006 at 9:13 PM
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same time as you, only day time, it is one o'clockumm lunch time already.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 7, 2006 at 5:04 PM
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THIS IS GOOD STUFF FOR MAN POEM REALY FACT AND VERY BEAUTIFUL YOU KNOW YOU HAVE A GREAT SOUL AS FAMILY POET MAN GOD BLESSED YOU....
...... BY THE WAY I WROTE SOMETHING ABOUT YOU IN FARAWAY ONE DAY AGO I AM SURE YOU WILL LIKE IT MY FRIEND..
...ITS TITLE FOR ALL THE BLOGIT..
.....najwa
posted by
NAJWA
on October 7, 2006 at 4:39 PM
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Thanks MC
Very sweet of you. What time is it now where you are? Here, it's nearly 12.30 am. Well, gotta browse before i sleep....!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 7, 2006 at 4:20 PM
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Tony don't worry, the last two lines made up for the rest!
After all being a good dad is worth
a thousand and one verse
a true poet of the heart
is a dad and his boy
enjoying the sun
in sweltering defeat
or the joy of victory
it matters not
a well-loved son
is worth a thousand suns
a thousands verses
written by the best of the best
could not compete
with the joy
of a day well spent
with father and son.
posted by
marieclaire66
on October 7, 2006 at 3:38 PM
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